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PostSubject: Rayney rayne   Rayney rayne I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 25, 2010 7:40 pm

Character Information

Name: Rayne

Age: 19

Bloodline: Uchiha

Elemental Affinity: Wind, Water

Desired Rank: A Rank Jounin

Desired Village:Kiri

Height: 6ft 2"

Weight: 12 stone

Description: (Try to pick up on specific points. Eye colour, hair colour and length, build, scars, distinguishing features.)

History:Rayne was always an ambitious member of his clan, aiming to learn his
jutsu faster than his peers, looking to be one of the first to delve
into the complicated intricasies of elemental manipulation of chakra and
striving to do well in the academy and rise up through the ranks as
fast as possible. The way he saw it, the lower down you were on the food
chain you were the less fun you were permitted to have, and the
stronger you were the more fun you could handle. It was these two
thought processes that formed the backbone for the aspiring manner by
which he lived his life. But when he hit the age of 8 he relised
something, Although the uchiha were feared it was not so much they that
were feared as the kekkei genkai they held. and as every member of the
clan knew it power they were more than happy to rely most heavily on
they're bloodline abilities. Things were getting lax, the ninja of the
uchiha were instead of training to reach both they're peak's as shinobi
and as weilders of the sharingan just allowing themselves to be mediocre
in many areas as they're eyes would make up for it. And this pissed
Rayne off, to have such great potential and not strive to use it too the
fullest clearly showed that many of these ninja were not worthy to hold
these eyes, his father had always told him "if your going to do a job,
the always do it properly" and that was exactly what he intended to do.
He would reach the top rungs of shinobi hierachy without once using the
optical capabilities that had been divinely endowed to him. And achive
it he did, he rose all the way to the rank of jounin without the
slightest hint of even a single tomow, his career marred with remarks
about"the faliure uchiha", "the boy with the lifeless eyes" or "the
dissapointment of the clan". But it was now that he would show them, now
that they would come to know. It wasn't that he couldnt weild the
sharingan, it was just that what they saw before them was a true uchiha
one who knew how to fight with the best even without those eyes.


RP Sample:

Another day, another chore. Once again Jin had been
assigned the job of patrolling Rukongai a moderately uneventful practice
that left him free to watch the happy villager go about they’re daily
routines. These slums were a poverty stricken place only two sectors in
from the poorest outskirts, they were home to crime and disease
backwater alleys filled with scum and death. Nothing seemed to prosper
here the residents usually either ending up dead or on the short path
through a career in crime, but that was the life of Rukongai and no
matter how hard it got the peasants lived it with a smile. That was
something that had always impressed Jin when he’d lived here the way
that they managed to pull through the gruelling struggle that formed the
everyday life on these streets without ever becoming depressed, a few
steps in any direction and it wasn’t long before you’d hear the
beginning note’s of some cheery shanty as the civilians sang they’re
work away.

As bountiful a feeding ground as soul society was it
was rare for it to experience the visiting of hollow. Filled with
unarmed souls just ripe for the plucking but guarded by the Gotei 13 it
proved an impressive deterrent to the demonic predators, upon saying
that it wasn’t like there were never any hollow, there were always the
odd few around the more hot-headed of the hollow population, breaking
through to prove they’re worth and feed they’re lust for power but on
the most part they stuck to the material world less abundant but also
the less dangerous of the two or feeding on they’re brethren in the
desert’s of Hueco Mundo.

As Jin walked the dusty street’s from
the corner of his eye he noted a stream of people panic stricken and
running out the entrance to one of Rukongai’s many back alley’s he
smiled at the clear sign of trouble, a signal that his day wasn’t too be
as boring as he’d first expected. As much as he hated the work of
patrol it was even worse when all he had for entertainment was the sound
of the idle chatter of the villagers.

Within a second he reached
the source of the trouble using Hohou to stand above the alley. As he
gazed down he saw what had instigated the panic the small sleek frame of
a hollow lay beneath him feeding on the soul it had recently ensnared.
The thin aerodynamic frame of a cheetah or some member of that big cat
family, with a mask to match. The demon sniffed the air, sensing the new
comer’s reiatsu it turned and fled running the backwater ally’s with
uncanny speed. Jin wouldn’t permit that, a beast like this running the
street’s of Rukongai was just too much of a threat it had too be
stopped. He took off after it the wind whipping past his face as he
deftly flash stepped through the tight confines, swiftly eluding the
approaching turns never once missing a step his agility always
compensating for him. The blurred surrounding flashed by just
intertwining blocks of colour melding from one to the next as his focus
stayed locked on his prey never letting the sprinting figure leave his
line of vision.

His breathing was ragged and staggered the air
passing him by so quickly he was having a hard time inhaling it, the
aroma’s of his surrounding never able to grasp his nostril’s leaving him
void of smell nothing concerning him other than his thought’s of
catching his prey, he began pouring more Reiatsu to his lower limbs
increasing further his speed, his moments nothing but a blur to passers
by, slowly gaining on the creature, it had to be at least Adjuchas class
to be keeping ahead of him at this speed, the distance between then
becoming neither shortened nor stretched they were matched foot fall for
foot fall. Jin pounded through the air his powerful movement ripping at
his muscles, he wasn’t yet used to travelling at these speed’s yet and
it was definitely taking its toll his leg’s becoming less and less
responsive to his commands at the gap between the two un-sightable
figures began to close. He was doing it finally closing in upon his
victim, he knew what he had to do…..but could he manage it, so far he
kept all his focus in maintaining his speed was it even possible to
perform a kidou simultaneously? Well he was about too find out.

“Hadou
Number 23: 36 Pound cannon”

The incantation ripping through his
throat as a rasp his voice box left as nothing more than a dried hunk of
flesh from the harsh currents he had forcibly inhaled down his throat.
The condensed blade of wind shot from his hand slicing through the
fleeing hollow cleaving it in two, Jin skidded too a halt able to do
nothing more than pant trying to revive his oxygen deprived organs. As
the hollow scattered to the wind, nothing left but it decomposing
carcass Jin released his Hohou dropping to the floor, as he moved to
walk away from the scene wanting to find a bench to rest his weary
muscles he saw something flutter in the wind. It was a seal, half
attached to the back of the rapidly disintegrating hollow’s head, and
what was more Jin recognised the symbol it was a control
seal………..someone had been puppeteering this hollow.

“Ahh shit” he
sighed under the realisation that he’d just managed to stumble upon
even more work.


Stats


Strength: 2

Speed: 30

Endurance: 10

Stamina/Chakra: 25

Ninjutsu: 18

Taijutsu: 5

Genjutsu: 15


Items




Justu:
Water, lightning, clan up to rank

Custom Jutsu: (When you create custom Jutsu they will be placed here)

Abilities: (When you attain Sharingan, Cursed Mark ect they will be added to this section of your bio)
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